I woke up this day as usual,
But aura around me seems unusual.
Half opened eyes and m all lazy,
Stretching my arms and things looked hazy.
Look at the weather outside,
Rain has engulfed my sight…
Scene outside looked like heaven,
And I feel myself on cloud no seven….
Rain dancing down and I held one drop of it,
Closed my eyes and listened to its beat.
Memories of past flashed through my sight,
A tear rolled down like a falling kite….
Recalling those days of yore,
Under rain!!! I was embracing her.
Divine feeling of being in her arms,
She drugged me with her charms.
She was looking sizzling in her frock,
I was falling for her with every rain drop….
Hairs scathed all round her face,
Lips trembling and she looked up in space.
Suddenly a thunderstorm strikes and she held me tight,
In her eyes I saw black shinning bright.
“I LOVE YOU”, she murmured,
Before I could say anything she was murdered…
Blood ran from her head to her neck,
Suddenly my whole life was wrecked.
I took her to the hospital gate,
But it was already too late.
On my hand still her blood slops,
And now I am just a living corpse..
Nothing is permanent in life,
Best could turn into worse anytime.
Be happy for what you wished happened,
Memories are what you will always reckon…..
For me that was the best and the worst day,
I smile and I cry remembering that rainy day….
19 comments:
nice one dear i havent thought even that u wrote so well and that is realy grt fab mindblowing nice one
well...yu olwaz write grt stuff..dis one is olso vry gud...
i wzz enjoin d beginnin ov d poem.. it wzz sensin romantic...buh the end ov it....!!!!!GOD..!!!
niwaz...grt...!!! luvd readin it..!!!
kavya ji thnkuu so much..
@shweta..heheh..are thoda murder type feeling daal di..heheh.kuch smjh nhn aa rha tha yr
I like it...like the flow of words,but why did u kill her at the end...how sad....well written
alpana@ well i thot of making it a mystery at the end..thats y did it.
Niks i loved it....wid lots f love my best wishes fr next...:)
thnku so much..<3<3..
love and death are the two extremities of life. the rainy day left a mark by recognizing both extremities at the same moment of life. the happiest moment suddenly became the saddest. loved the flow and the write up. wish she could return back home from hospital.
well done Nikhil:))
thnkuu so much sancheeta..life truly show us the various colors..we are just a part of it..
I read this listening to Brenda Granger's video on her page... and somehow it complemented the mood you've set on your post.
Strong emotions could be drawn by good poetry and music... and I felt that way towards yours...
I could feel those raindrops rolling down my cheeks...
I loved how a guy could be so in touch with his feelings...
Complimenti...bellissima poesia ;)
A sad but beautiful poem...wish she had lived though :(
@mellisa..thnks a lot..and yes a guy cn feel like this..:)
sulekha@thnkuu so much
Thanks for the follow, following your blog too :)
pleasure is all mine lady..:)
y do u write such sad things...well written though! :)
ahaa.... i dun write yr..it all comes frm inside....thnkuuu
oh, you brought tears to my eyes!
eliza..:)
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